Suffers from the same issues as the first part.
Also, are you doing this as one take? Most VAs usually do multiple takes for each line and just pick which one is best.
Regardless, you should trim your speaking audio to remove any background noise if you aren't saying anything.
You should also change the volume of the music, for 2 reasons. For one, making the music quieter can prevent characters' lines from not being heard.
And secondly, decreasing and increasing the songs' volume until they're about the same volume prevents any jarring music changes, i.e. music 3:30 being louder than any other time in the audio(unless that was your intention)