I must've forgotten to rate this during the live action jam

A good video, but it's more of an edit than an parody animation.

It's alright. Definitely needs improvement in some areas, but it is fine. It definitely escapes the "critic trap" you were talking about.

My only concern is that you're rushing into this. Before the pilot, the only creative work I've seen of yours(excluding your video essays) were your drawings. Usually, most people build up to an animated pilot after making small animations and slowly increasing the scope, so excuse me if I assume you're inexperienced with this. And you've already done a Kickstarter campaign and might be working on episode 2 right now.

I can't tell you to stop, but I kinda wish you took more time between the pilot's release and starting the Kickstarter in order to reflect on the finished animation. Though I understand striking while the iron is hot.

really like the vibes off this one. especially the unique presentation of game mechanics(as well as how the lack of movement options is portrayed by the left and right buttons being redundant).

Would be better if the propeller hat had a visible meter

Welcome back, Mosa Lina

Sounds like 5 other YCR remixes.
Maybe everything has already been done

Suffers from the same issues as the first part.

Also, are you doing this as one take? Most VAs usually do multiple takes for each line and just pick which one is best.
Regardless, you should trim your speaking audio to remove any background noise if you aren't saying anything.
You should also change the volume of the music, for 2 reasons. For one, making the music quieter can prevent characters' lines from not being heard.
And secondly, decreasing and increasing the songs' volume until they're about the same volume prevents any jarring music changes, i.e. music 3:30 being louder than any other time in the audio(unless that was your intention)

Green... So green

Nice attention to detail with how Super Shadow adds extra light to the room

You made that Sonic.exe drawing? Thank you for your agendapost. Sonic.exe should not be in powerscaling discussion

What a nice character. I wonder what he has to say.