animation is kinda slow

FLCL tomorrow

Went a different direction than expected.
But it cut off too early

really like the vibes off this one. especially the unique presentation of game mechanics(as well as how the lack of movement options is portrayed by the left and right buttons being redundant).

Would be better if the propeller hat had a visible meter

Welcome back, Mosa Lina

Sounds like 5 other YCR remixes.
Maybe everything has already been done

Suffers from the same issues as the first part.

Also, are you doing this as one take? Most VAs usually do multiple takes for each line and just pick which one is best.
Regardless, you should trim your speaking audio to remove any background noise if you aren't saying anything.
You should also change the volume of the music, for 2 reasons. For one, making the music quieter can prevent characters' lines from not being heard.
And secondly, decreasing and increasing the songs' volume until they're about the same volume prevents any jarring music changes, i.e. music 3:30 being louder than any other time in the audio(unless that was your intention)

Green... So green

Damn how many thumbnails do you need?

Why is her boob melting

I thought this was from Undertale Yellow 2