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It was mainly one shot without much movement.

ShadyTheOne responds:

It's sort of just a test animatic. I'm dipping my feet into the world of animation, so I wasn't aiming for anything too crazy. Just a little video to hopefully make people laugh :)

The mixing is off, so I couldn't hear much of the audio

CraigCommander responds:

i apologize, getting some of the audio clips was difficult without them having the background music where they originated from.

You could probably export the actual flipnote file, somehow, rather than recording the flipnote with a camera

TheMartoon responds:

That's a good idea thank you! I have actually thought of it but I have weirdly became fond of the black void, bad quality and weird vibe from recording it off my phone, it's became a part of the style at this point so I might keep it that way haha, thank you though!

I like it, but the teeth look flesh coloured. I would've preferred if it were blue, or white, like the eyes are.

IceBridget responds:

Thanks, I'll make sure to change that for next time!

I was cautious that the teeth would blend into the white muzzle too much, so darkened them and added the slight red tone as it's inside the mouth.
But I can certainly change the rig on the next Tails Tube.

Thank you for your feedback, much appreciated!

I don't really like how shaky the character is in the first few seconds. Maybe it's because you're animating on 1s, or that you may not be using onion skins to help you.

Pyronator responds:

It’s on 2s and 3s, it just looks like that cause it’s a 3 second shitpost.

Killing people to get out of debt has been done, but you could change some things to make it new. You can also elongate the series by adding in "interest" which is just more money over time. E.g. Jiro may have to fight more yokai for wasting time.

Stradomyre responds:

Oh yeah don’t worry there’s a lot more to the story than the contract >:)

Thanks for messaging me. If not I wouldn't have seen this trailer.

Avonom responds:

Thank you! Here's the finished version: http://www.newgrounds.com/portal/view/689737

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Games whenever.
Animations even less frequently.
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