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UnculturedMutt

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It's really hard to discern characters in the foreground from those in the background. It doesn't help either that your stylisation of the characters have their limbs extremely spaced apart from the torso, so it's even harder to hide a character behind another.

The only feedback I could give is to push the characters closer together to show that Tricky is behind them

That's just when you get invested in a villain way more than the hero

This is just a redraw of the original.

Tichat002 responds:

Well... Yeah, it's the joke
I just did a low cost art contest Ver

Is it 50×50 pixel area?

Luis responds:

nope. thats what these guys call themselves. idk

The background probably shouldn't be a blank void, since they're in a corn field. If you can't draw that much, then you should use a green colour for the background.

Why is the tops of the crewmates' air pack darker than the sides? It makes it look hollow

You shouldn't use grey to shade everything. Also, you should add some texture to the sky to separate it from the building below.

thekirbykrisis responds:

But that's the only shading color I could find.

Firstly, you don't need to put your name in the title of your art.

Second of all, I think it may be unfinished, because the left side of Sans' jacket is uncoloured.

Third of all, Sans' right hand should be clenched more to show he's pointing his middle finger up

Q. Is this a screenshot?

I think you should post teasers on posts, not as actual art

Art every month.
Games whenever.
Animations even less frequently.
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