UnculturedMutt's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[Mario Bros]

I feel like you're suffering from same face syndrome with the eyes

[Inktober 2019]

The first and second pictures are swapped

[Alien tourist and their dog]

That looks good, but there's nothing that makes them look like tourists. Unfortunately, they're so small in the picture that you can't add any detail. You could add the tourism aspect with vandalism on the rock they're on, overcrowding or flashing lights.

ieJoMaFLo responds:

I like the vandalism idea. But to be honest this was mainly just me having some fun with a background and then throwing in some figures to give it some scale, so the space tourist thing was a total last minute idea that I just ran with.

[GlyphGaia: The Goblin Knight_Beryl]

First of all, why does she have a giant sword?

Secondly, do you have any inspirations for her character design? Anything she may be wearing that portrays her personality. I've heard it's best to work on a certain trope, then branch off into natural or unseen branches e.g. she could be an adventurer as a ranger or scout, and therefore may believe that she must be merited to feel she has gained progress.

Maybe her being a goblin(known for their love of gold) could branch off into her being a drifter. That way, she's still an adventurer going to different lands, but she retains traits of goblins obsessing over gold, as she needs the bare minimum to survive.

[Chillin' in the Tub]

Really good, but you can easily see that some parts are edited in with the line boldness and how blurry the lines are. My only recommendation is that you should make the lines more crisp

PrinceOfGoblinS responds:

Thank you, I'm actually always looking for ways to improve so it means a lot to me.

[PAPER MARIO PIXEL ART]

Nice shading, but it implies Mario's bottom shoe is in front and is that shape that we are seeing

[Metroid fusion watercolor]

Looks good in general. However, colour is not always in the lines and sometimes looks like you were swatching on the character.

[Zuma is not amused in the dark]

Character is perfect. It looks like a TV show made by Disney (similar to the Lion Guard). However, I need more context: can you explain this scene a bit more to me?

[Unique scribble style artwork of a puppy smiling.]

Can you do more drawings like this and less of like Kobe?

[Honey Lemon comic Issue 1 page 3 inks]

Not art critique but for comics: put the reveal on a different page to build tension about it.