There's no punchline here, though the art is nice.
There's no punchline here, though the art is nice.
For Bucky Hyena, you still should add shading to his fur. I'm guessing you used pure black, so next time, you should probably do a lighter shade or just a dark colour to allow shading.
I think the main problem is in the hair. If the fire is in front of the hair, then you should remove the lines in that section. Otherwise, the shading of the hair seems more like a group of lines.
Dio's eyes aren't facing Tailsko, and there's no shadows separating different parts. This is especially bad, since they are both wearing the same colour clothes.
The dialogue interlaps a lot. Try colour-coding it for each character
For the sans emoji, you should colour his head like you colour teeth, as they are both made of bone
I like how much it is styled
Thank you^^
Can you add a picture of the colour palette?
I can do better than that. Here is the Lospec page for it that has all the info about it as well as a picture.
https://lospec.com/palette-list/night-11
It kind of looks like he's made of copper
I think that you should've used brown instead of the black around the vibe check emoji's eyes. It makes the face more colourful in the first picture.
Ngl it’ll just look like shit stains around his eyes or something
Art every month.
Games whenever.
Animations even less frequently.
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