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UnculturedMutt

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It would probably be better if the flag had the same red lineart

CyanSpyder responds:

Yeah that's a good idea, it would stand out from the background more, thanks

How comes the drink doesn't shake when he slams it on the table

grumpyfart responds:

I didn’t feel like animating it :(

Please don't shade with black/highlight with white

FahadLami-NG responds:

I know what I'm doing

I can't believe how you blurred the background without making it not look pixelated

Please explain why their expressions are like that.

tomy6 responds:

They're acting smug cus they just did something i guess

Try a different colour palette next time

I feel like you should warp the text to fit the slanted surface of the blade.

MurasakiNoodle responds:

This was my first usage of trying to implement text with form, to be honest I had trouble trying to define the slanted surface that I wanted. I'll try my best to figure ot how I can do this better in future. Thank you for you input and critique.

You know that you can make that a post.

I feel like the static effect would be better if the gif was faster.

It looks like you're using grey for shading. Try using appropriate(in this case, skin) colours for shading. Also, what your using for shading makes the characters look to shiny and chrome.

Densetsu1000 responds:

Thank you very much for the advice.

Ultimately, I'd prefer to try and continue using grey tones for my initial shading on the white canvas, prior to applying the colours, as I'm aiming to try and create my mages in a way where they can appear "completed" as both monochromatic or coloured images.

However, in taking your advice, I'll try and better blend the grey tones into the colours that I do use in the future, so that they don't appear as jarring as they currently do on my coloured images.

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