UnculturedMutt's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[Honey Lemon comic Issue 1 page 3 inks]

Not art critique but for comics: put the reveal on a different page to build tension about it.

[Star platinum]

The eyes look crammed. Remember to give space for facial features. Also, add shading. Since you're working with markers I recommend cel shading. Lastly, rub out sketch lines.

[Still Gotta get Up In The Mornin]

Remember to add things into the mirror. Your scene isn't set in a void

TheDikTatorTot responds:

Hey! Thanks for the review :)

I completely agree, however for this piece it was intentional as the rest of the piece has alot of detail and i wanted him to stand out in the mirror! If this was a more realistic piece however I would have definitely put detail in the mirror.

[Fem Jotaro + STAR PLATINUM]

Really good but the way the golden buttons shine suggest that Star Platinum's hand is moving in two opposite directions. I recommend shortening the yellow lines on the top of their hand

[dino stompted on pumpkins]

What is this supposed to reference?

[GO GO ZEPPELI !]

Are you going to do this on a transparent background

[HSDK: Shinpaku vs Yomi 3 (JEFFANIME)]

Great choreography! But try to better your art style. Mainly the face.

laika687 responds:

As I stated in my profile, I am no artist. This is a piece that I commissioned from jeffanime.

[Star]

Your art style needs more work, and you should never use the default font in a comic (unless it's on a device in a scene)

AdventVoice responds:

Thanks for the input. I am glad you liked the story. Stay tuned next time for more of our show.

[For house and Goomba]

What am I supposed to say? It looks goofy (in a good way)

[Firey Groom]

So... You saw the original Nintendo Bowsette?

HOwLiNG-MAdFoxHatter responds:

I saw it after completing this, and I want to draw something with that original concept so bad but bogged down by too many projects xD