UnculturedMutt's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[Chillin' in the Tub]

Really good, but you can easily see that some parts are edited in with the line boldness and how blurry the lines are. My only recommendation is that you should make the lines more crisp

PrinceOfGoblinS responds:

Thank you, I'm actually always looking for ways to improve so it means a lot to me.

[PAPER MARIO PIXEL ART]

Nice shading, but it implies Mario's bottom shoe is in front and is that shape that we are seeing

[Metroid fusion watercolor]

Looks good in general. However, colour is not always in the lines and sometimes looks like you were swatching on the character.

[Zuma is not amused in the dark]

Character is perfect. It looks like a TV show made by Disney (similar to the Lion Guard). However, I need more context: can you explain this scene a bit more to me?

[Unique scribble style artwork of a puppy smiling.]

Can you do more drawings like this and less of like Kobe?

[Honey Lemon comic Issue 1 page 3 inks]

Not art critique but for comics: put the reveal on a different page to build tension about it.

[Star platinum]

The eyes look crammed. Remember to give space for facial features. Also, add shading. Since you're working with markers I recommend cel shading. Lastly, rub out sketch lines.

[Still Gotta get Up In The Mornin]

Remember to add things into the mirror. Your scene isn't set in a void

TheDikTatorTot responds:

Hey! Thanks for the review :)

I completely agree, however for this piece it was intentional as the rest of the piece has alot of detail and i wanted him to stand out in the mirror! If this was a more realistic piece however I would have definitely put detail in the mirror.

[Fem Jotaro + STAR PLATINUM]

Really good but the way the golden buttons shine suggest that Star Platinum's hand is moving in two opposite directions. I recommend shortening the yellow lines on the top of their hand

[dino stompted on pumpkins]

What is this supposed to reference?