UnculturedMutt's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[Everyone's favourite Domestic Terrorist]

It would probably be better if the flag had the same red lineart

CyanSpyder responds:

Yeah that's a good idea, it would stand out from the background more, thanks

[Why he so angry? [$]]

How comes the drink doesn't shake when he slams it on the table

grumpyfart responds:

I didn’t feel like animating it :(

[Defeated (Blasphemous Fan Art)]

Please don't shade with black/highlight with white

FahadLami-NG responds:

I know what I'm doing

[Sonic and Tails]

Please explain why their expressions are like that.

tomy6 responds:

They're acting smug cus they just did something i guess

[Alexander Anderson - Hellsing Ultimate]

I feel like you should warp the text to fit the slanted surface of the blade.

MurasakiNoodle responds:

This was my first usage of trying to implement text with form, to be honest I had trouble trying to define the slanted surface that I wanted. I'll try my best to figure ot how I can do this better in future. Thank you for you input and critique.

[Stripes]

It looks like you're using grey for shading. Try using appropriate(in this case, skin) colours for shading. Also, what your using for shading makes the characters look to shiny and chrome.

Densetsu1000 responds:

Thank you very much for the advice.

Ultimately, I'd prefer to try and continue using grey tones for my initial shading on the white canvas, prior to applying the colours, as I'm aiming to try and create my mages in a way where they can appear "completed" as both monochromatic or coloured images.

However, in taking your advice, I'll try and better blend the grey tones into the colours that I do use in the future, so that they don't appear as jarring as they currently do on my coloured images.

[test]

Fill the picture with white next time

Clawscobra responds:

alright thanks for the feed back i was just seeing what size my canvas nedded to be for the neo geo jam and slapped that on

[New Painted Plummet Jaiden Sprite]

Please explain her choice of clothing

RafaTheBeat responds:

It follows her reference pic design closely. https://cdn.discordapp.com/attachments/443586341884919808/729136678215876698/Painted_Plummet_Jaiden_Animations.png

[bullies]

Are they the ones from the Simpsons?

drallimylime responds:

you know it, dude! :)

[Meet Benji]

You haven't really explained his character. You just wrote down some of his character traits.

Jasa123 responds:

Yeah I'm planning a comic so I don't want to give away story beats