UnculturedMutt's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[Commission - In the lair of the Hermit]

My main gripe is that the left tree in the foreground may cover too much of the character. Apart from that, everything is fine

Vonder responds:

thank you, I will consider that next time when making scenery :'>

[Super Mario 64 BLJ]

Maybe add some action lines to show what direction he's going

Dekugh responds:

Thanks for the feedback! I appreciate it

[Fat Gum the Shield or Spear]

Try to use the same shading style for the spear attack. Also, shade with naturally darker colours instead of just gray or black

Fighter1Gamer responds:

Ok thanks for the tips.

[Manga Drawing]

I have a few tips: First of all, I'm believing that you're a child, so invest in plain/clear paper. It doesn't have to be much, just printer paper is good enough. Second of all, make the panel borders clearer by making them thicker or adding a bit of space between them. Last of all, add a line between the chin/lower jaw and the neck.

Lolireaper responds:

Thanks but it’s an old drawing so I haven’t finished it for over 4 years and I’m over 19-20 years of age

[Dmitry]

Just because it's not the main thing doesn't mean you shouldn't shade it. Remember that the bin lid and the bin are two different entities, so shade the top of the bin to show that it's being covered. Do the same for the right arm behind the torso and the torso behind the left arm

Wolfman-Al responds:

Thank you. It was actually more of a character study, so I did a quick and dirty with the shading. Somehow I overlooked the trashcan.

[Lourdes]

I love the different styles of shading

MatthewLopz responds:

thank you!
i've been trying to add more shading to my pieces without straight up just cell shading everything, mix of a bunch of stuff including screentones 👍

[Sixfanart Challenge 1]

Please add names?

EpithetSoup responds:

All fixed! Sorry about that.

[Goku the Monkey]

Nice use of colours to represent the gi. Main problem is the gloves. Maybe make the gloves blue but with white like the gloves Vegeta uses.

Rlectro responds:

Thanks for the tip, I was having trouble thinking of a good color for the gloves so i just defaulted to the gray

[KobaltSteel's #SixFanartsChallenge]

The pictures seem stretched

KobaltSteel responds:

Well... they were, to fit into the boxes... but I'll fix it

EDIT: fixed!

[The Sunset Defenders! Back in Action]

Don't know why but the two on the left look like kids

ToastieTV responds:

That's cos they are kids, They're all kids