UnculturedMutt's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[Goku the Monkey]

Nice use of colours to represent the gi. Main problem is the gloves. Maybe make the gloves blue but with white like the gloves Vegeta uses.

Rlectro responds:

Thanks for the tip, I was having trouble thinking of a good color for the gloves so i just defaulted to the gray

[KobaltSteel's #SixFanartsChallenge]

The pictures seem stretched

KobaltSteel responds:

Well... they were, to fit into the boxes... but I'll fix it

EDIT: fixed!

[The Sunset Defenders! Back in Action]

Don't know why but the two on the left look like kids

ToastieTV responds:

That's cos they are kids, They're all kids

[#SIxCharacterFanart]

Unfortunately, you didn't draw the characters big enough to fill the boxes, so it gives off a feeling of emptiness.

A-Guy-Called-FRANK responds:

Now that you mention it, i kinda see it

Tnx

[Mellow]

What is he holding in his hand?

Erebboi responds:

A big glass sword and a gun in the other

[SUPER MARIO!! (#Mar10)]

I feel like there's something wrong with the angling of Mario's head

GlitchyPSI responds:

Could be, can you elaborate?

[Alien tourist and their dog]

That looks good, but there's nothing that makes them look like tourists. Unfortunately, they're so small in the picture that you can't add any detail. You could add the tourism aspect with vandalism on the rock they're on, overcrowding or flashing lights.

ieJoMaFLo responds:

I like the vandalism idea. But to be honest this was mainly just me having some fun with a background and then throwing in some figures to give it some scale, so the space tourist thing was a total last minute idea that I just ran with.

[GlyphGaia: The Goblin Knight_Beryl]

First of all, why does she have a giant sword?

Secondly, do you have any inspirations for her character design? Anything she may be wearing that portrays her personality. I've heard it's best to work on a certain trope, then branch off into natural or unseen branches e.g. she could be an adventurer as a ranger or scout, and therefore may believe that she must be merited to feel she has gained progress.

Maybe her being a goblin(known for their love of gold) could branch off into her being a drifter. That way, she's still an adventurer going to different lands, but she retains traits of goblins obsessing over gold, as she needs the bare minimum to survive.

Petulanter responds:

I gave her the giant sword because I just thought it would be funny to have a small goblin swing around a giant sword.

The idea of her character design was based off of the female warrior class from dragon quest. Thanks for the ideas I will keep that into consideration.

[Chillin' in the Tub]

Really good, but you can easily see that some parts are edited in with the line boldness and how blurry the lines are. My only recommendation is that you should make the lines more crisp

PrinceOfGoblinS responds:

Thank you, I'm actually always looking for ways to improve so it means a lot to me.

[Still Gotta get Up In The Mornin]

Remember to add things into the mirror. Your scene isn't set in a void

TheDikTatorTot responds:

Hey! Thanks for the review :)

I completely agree, however for this piece it was intentional as the rest of the piece has alot of detail and i wanted him to stand out in the mirror! If this was a more realistic piece however I would have definitely put detail in the mirror.