Don't know why but the two on the left look like kids
Don't know why but the two on the left look like kids
That's cos they are kids, They're all kids
Unfortunately, you didn't draw the characters big enough to fill the boxes, so it gives off a feeling of emptiness.
Now that you mention it, i kinda see it
Tnx
What is he holding in his hand?
A big glass sword and a gun in the other
I feel like there's something wrong with the angling of Mario's head
Could be, can you elaborate?
That looks good, but there's nothing that makes them look like tourists. Unfortunately, they're so small in the picture that you can't add any detail. You could add the tourism aspect with vandalism on the rock they're on, overcrowding or flashing lights.
I like the vandalism idea. But to be honest this was mainly just me having some fun with a background and then throwing in some figures to give it some scale, so the space tourist thing was a total last minute idea that I just ran with.
Really good, but you can easily see that some parts are edited in with the line boldness and how blurry the lines are. My only recommendation is that you should make the lines more crisp
Thank you, I'm actually always looking for ways to improve so it means a lot to me.
Remember to add things into the mirror. Your scene isn't set in a void
Hey! Thanks for the review :)
I completely agree, however for this piece it was intentional as the rest of the piece has alot of detail and i wanted him to stand out in the mirror! If this was a more realistic piece however I would have definitely put detail in the mirror.
Great choreography! But try to better your art style. Mainly the face.
As I stated in my profile, I am no artist. This is a piece that I commissioned from jeffanime.
Your art style needs more work, and you should never use the default font in a comic (unless it's on a device in a scene)
Thanks for the input. I am glad you liked the story. Stay tuned next time for more of our show.
So... You saw the original Nintendo Bowsette?
I saw it after completing this, and I want to draw something with that original concept so bad but bogged down by too many projects xD
Art every month.
Games whenever.
Animations even less frequently.
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